If you are very busy at work or at school, do you have ways to balance your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think if I am so busy at work or at school, I can\'t balance my life.
We have a feeling so if we work so hard, we will be tired becuse of our work.
And we have to enjoy our life with doing the things that we want to do.
But if we are so tired, we can\'t do the things that we want to do in our life.
So if we are too busy at work or school, I think we can\'t balance our life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
People should still enjoy life despite their busy schedules. Learn to make time for yourself. Nothing should be taking your peace away. It\'s called self-love. :) Keep it up!
I think if I am so busy at work or at school, I can\'t balance my life.
>> CORRECT
We have a feeling so if we work so hard, we will be tired becuse of our work.
>> We have this urge to work so hard and eventually we will be tired because of it.
And we have to enjoy our life with doing the things that we want to do.
>> We have to enjoy our life by doing things we want to do.
But if we are so tired, we can\'t do the things that we want to do in our life.
>> CORRECT
So if we are too busy at work or school, I think we can\'t balance our life.
>> CORRECT
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