If you are very busy at work or at school, do you have ways to balance your life?

2021-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I must have my rest time. because it’s good that i’m busy but I don’t think I have to be busy until i’m having a hard time and losing myself. so I think busier ,the more care about my rest.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

People should still enjoy life despite their busy schedules. Learn to make time for yourself. Nothing should be taking your peace away. It\'s called self-love. :) Keep it up!

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I must have my rest time. because it’s good that i’m busy but I don’t think I have to be busy until i’m having a hard time and losing myself.

>> I must have my rest time because it may be good that I am busy but I don\'t think I should be too busy to the point that I will loose myself.

so I think busier ,the more care about my rest.

>> So I think that the busier I am, the more I [이름]\'t get any rest.

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