If you are very busy at work or at school, do you have ways to balance your life? Explain your answe
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Hello [이름]!
Nice one for making this homework again! I hope you won\'t forget the patterns you have learned as you get busy next year. ^^
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Although I\'m really busy, I need to rest because my body is become sick.
>>Although I am really busy, I need to take some rest because my body is becoming sick.
To have rest time, I make scheduler before the week.
>>I make a schedule before the week to make sure I have my rest time.
When I write the scheduler, I have to make enough s[이름]p time.
>>When I write my schedule, I have to take note that I get enough s[이름]p.
If I can\'t finish my work in time, I change from my s[이름]p time to working time.
>>If I can\'t finish my work on time, I change my routine instead of s[이름]ping.
If I really busy and have to work or study too much, I wake up early.
>>If I am really busy and have to work or study, I wake up early.
Usually, I want to s[이름]p late time.
>>Usually I want to s[이름]p late at night.
Waking up early is really emergency to me.
>>Waking up early only happens when there\'s something important I need to do.
When I can\'t enough s[이름]p, I\'m s[이름]py every time.
>>When I can\'t get enough s[이름]p, I feel s[이름]py every time.
So I drink much coffee when I\'m really busy.
>>So I drink much coffee when I\'m really busy.
Now, I\'m not really busy because I don\'t have a job.
>>Correct.
I have to practice English, and prepare to go abroad.
>>Correct.
On second thought, there are a lot to do.
>>Correct.
>>OR: There are a lot of things to do.
I\'m going to make scheduler and I should restart busy life.
>>I\'m going to make my schedule and I should start having a busy life.
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