If you are very busy at work or at school, do you have ways to balance your life? Explain your answe

2021-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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Although I\'m really busy, I need to rest because my body is become sick. To have rest time, I make scheduler before the week. When I write the scheduler, I have to make enough s[이름]p time. If I can\'t finish my work in time, I change from my s[이름]p time to working time. If I really busy and have to work or study too much, I wake up early. Usually, I want to s[이름]p late time. Waking up early is really emergency to me. When I can\'t enough s[이름]p, I\'m s[이름]py every time. So I drink much coffee when I\'m really busy. Now, I\'m not really busy because I don\'t have a job. I have to practice English, and prepare to go abroad. On second thought, there are a lot to do. I\'m going to make scheduler and I should restart busy life.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Nice one for making this homework again!  I hope you won\'t forget the patterns you have learned as you get busy next year. ^^


-T. Maine


Although I\'m really busy, I need to rest because my body is become sick.

>>Although I am really busy, I need to take some rest because my body is becoming sick.
 To have rest time, I make scheduler before the week.

>>I make a schedule before the week to make sure I have my rest time.
 When I write the scheduler, I have to make enough s[이름]p time.

>>When I write my schedule, I have to take note that I get enough s[이름]p.
 If I can\'t finish my work in time, I change from my s[이름]p time to working time.

>>If I can\'t finish my work on time, I change my routine instead of s[이름]ping.
 If I really busy and have to work or study too much, I wake up early.

>>If I am really busy and have to work or study, I wake up early.
 Usually, I want to s[이름]p late time.

>>Usually I want to s[이름]p late at night.

Waking up early is really emergency to me.

>>Waking up early only happens when there\'s something important I need to do.
 When I can\'t enough s[이름]p, I\'m s[이름]py every time.

>>When I can\'t get enough s[이름]p, I feel s[이름]py every time. 

So I drink much coffee when I\'m really busy.

>>So I drink much coffee when I\'m really busy.
 Now, I\'m not really busy because I don\'t have a job.

>>Correct.
 I have to practice English, and prepare to go abroad.

>>Correct.
 On second thought, there are a lot to do.

>>Correct. 

>>OR: There are a lot of things to do.
 I\'m going to make scheduler and I should restart busy life.

>>I\'m going to make my schedule and I should start having a busy life.


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