If you are very busy at work or at school, do you have ways to balance your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, there is no way to balance my life if I was very busy at work or school.
Our time is limited, so we need to balance it before we spend the entire time.
But, if I was busy at workplace or school, that means that I spent too much time to work or learn.
And that means it is harder to balance our time too.
Because of this reason, if I was very busy at my work or class, then I think that it is hard to balance my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I agree that we should learn how to balance our lives so we can live it to the fullest. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
Our time is limited, so we need to balance it before we spend the entire time.
Our time is limited, so we need to balance it before we spend the entire time.
>>Our time is limited, so we need to balance it before time is up.
But, if I was busy at workplace or school, that means that I spent too much time to work or learn.
But, if I was busy at workplace or school, that means that I spent too much time to work or learn.
>>But, if I was busy at the workplace or school, that means that I\'m spending too much time to work or learn.
And that means it is harder to balance our time too.
And that means it is harder to balance our time too.
>>CORRECT!
Because of this reason, if I was very busy at my work or class, then I think that it is hard to balance my life.
Because of this reason, if I was very busy at my work or class, then I think that it is hard to balance my life.
>>Because of this reason, if I was very busy with work and classes, then I think that it is hard to balance my life.
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