If you can add a room to your house, what room would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can add a room in my house, I want to add my workroom.
I want to be an artist so I have to practice creating my songs and lyrics.
And I don\'t have things to do that and my room is so small to do that.
I also love to draw and write.
And if I have my workroom in my house, it will be more fun and I will able to get some insperation.
So if I can add a room in my house, I want to add my workroom in my house.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
That sounds great! You would feel more motivated in pursuing your dreams.
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If I can add a room in my house, I want to add my workroom.
>> If I can add a room in my house, I want it to be my workroom.
I want to be an artist so I have to practice creating my songs and lyrics.
>> CORRECT
And I don\'t have things to do that and my room is so small to do that.
>> And I don\'t have a place to do that and my room is so small.
I also love to draw and write.
>> CORRECT
And if I have my workroom in my house, it will be more fun and I will able to get some insperation.
>> And if I have my workroom in my house, it will be more fun and I will able to get some inspiration.
So if I can add a room in my house, I want to add my workroom in my house.
>>So if I can add a room in my house, I want it to be my workroom.
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