If you can be a celebrity or influencer, which one do you want to be?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were a celebrity, I want to be a singer because, I like a music.
I just want be a person who is famous but anyone don\'t know his face.
Popular makes me tired.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your opinion about celebrities. I think that would be good to be famous for your voice. Keep it up!
~~Teacher Ryka^^
If I were a celebrity, I want to be a singer because, I like a music.
>>If I were a celebrity, I would want to be a singer because I love music.
I just want be a person who is famous but anyone don\'t know his face.
>>I would prefer to be famous but not have my face widely recognized.
Popular makes me tired.
>>Being excessively popular can be exhausting.
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