If you can be an actress, what role would you want to play? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
If i can be an actress, i hope to play a role of the rich because I’d like to know what kinds of a house and the meal the wealthy people actually have. I heard they own a high-end apartment or a mansion with a garden, but I haven’t seen it. Therefore, I want to have an experience of becimg rich and how it feels.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Judy!
This is one of the dreams of many ordinary person in real life. Not only in acting and in movies but in reality, we all want to be rich! Of course, if you play this role, you must also understand that the rich people donot stay in their mansion all the time but go home there to relax. Rich peopl do a lot of work contrary to what movies show that they are luxurious and simply enjoy the things they have.
I am sure that you can be rich someday. It starts with picking up your hair on the floor. Rich people never liked dirty floor. ^^
Thank you for your homework answer!
-T. Donna~
>> If I can be an actress, I hope to play the role of a rich person because I’d like to know what kinds of houses and the meals the wealthy people actually have.
I heard they own a high-end apartment or a mansion with a garden, but I haven’t seen it.
>> Correct!
Therefore, I want to have an experience of becimg rich and how it feels.
>> Correct!
Or: Therefore, I want to have an experience of becoming rich and how it feels.
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