If you can be reincarnated, what kind of life would you want on your next life and why?

2021-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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It\'s so difficult. I have never thought about it. I don\'t believe reincarnateion, so I want to work hard right now and I believe I am doing it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jennifer:)

Some people want to live a different life and some don\'t. At the end of the day, what matters is that we should be contented with the life that we have right now. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

It\'s so difficult.
>> CORRECT

I have never thought about it.

>> CORRECT

I don\'t believe reincarnateion, so I want to work hard right now

>> I don\'t believe in reincarnation, so I want to work hard right now

and I believe I am doing it.

>> I believe that I am doing it now.

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