If you can be reincarnated, what kind of life would you want on your next life and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can be reincarnated, I just want to live my new life like now.
I think I am the luckest guy in this world.
Before, I envied other people or my friends because I thought that their lives are more better that mine.
But I recognized that all people have their cons and we don\'t have to ashame about the cons.
So since than, I thought I am luckest guy in this world and my life is the most beautiful in this world.
So if I can be reincarnated, I just want to live my new life like now.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
Some people want to live a different life and some don\'t. At the end of the day, what matters is that we should be contented with the life that we have right now. :)
If I can be reincarnated, I just want to live my new life like now.
>> If I can be reincarnated, I just want to live my new life the way I do I do it now.
I think I am the luckest guy in this world.
>> I think I am the luckiest guy in this world.
Before, I envied other people or my friends because I thought that their lives are more better that mine.
>> Before, I envied other people because I thought that their lives are better than mine.
But I recognized that all people have their cons and we don\'t have to ashame about the cons.
>> But I recognized that all people have their own battles and we don\'t have to be ashamed about the it.
So since than, I thought I am luckest guy in this world and my life is the most beautiful in this world.
>>Since then, I realized that I am luckiest guy in this world and my life is the best l in this world.
So if I can be reincarnated, I just want to live my new life like now.
>> So if I can be reincarnated, I just want to live the same life that I have right now.
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