If you can change one of your personalities, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I don\'t want to change my personalities.
Before, I thought that some of my personalities are bad so I have to change them.
But now, I think I fixed some of them, and I think that my personalities are great so I don\'t need to change them.
I made a lot of friends because of my personalities, so I don\'t need to change my personalities.
What I have to do is keep my personalities and love my self.
Also I think the attitude that loving our personalities is very important in our lives.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] :)
That\'s true. Our personality defines who we are so we have to accept it.
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Actually, I don\'t want to change my personalities.
>> CORRECT
Before, I thought that some of my personalities are bad so I have to change them.
>> CORRECT
But now, I think I fixed some of them, and I think that my personalities are great so I don\'t need to change them.
>> CORRECT
I made a lot of friends because of my personalities, so I don\'t need to change my personalities.
>> I made a lot of friends because of my personalities so I don\'t need to change them.
What I have to do is keep my personalities and love my self.
>> CORRECT
Also I think the attitude that loving our personalities is very important in our lives.
>> I also think that loving our personalities is very important in our lives.
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