If you can change something about the government of South Korea, what would it be and why?
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If I can change somethings about the government of South Korea, I want to change the system of tax.
Because in South Korea, we only pay a little money for the tax.
Because of this reason, I want to change the system of tax.
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If I can change somethings about the government of South Korea, I want to change the system of tax.
>If I can change something about the government of South Korea, I want to change the system of tax.
Because in South Korea, we only pay a little money for the tax.
>> CORRECT
Because of this reason, I want to change the system of tax.
>> CORRECT
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