If you can change something about your lifestyle, what would it be and why?

2022-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I can do it, I would want to quit smoking. I\'ve done for 5 years. Even though I know that smoking is bad for me, I can\'t still quit it until now. But now, It\'s a time to quit it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

Yes, that would be a big improvement in your lifestyle.

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If I can do it, I would want to quit smoking.

>> CORRECT

I\'ve done for 5 years.

>> I\'ve been doing this for 5 years.

Even though I know that smoking is bad for me, I can\'t still quit it until now.

>> Even though I know that smoking is bad for me, I still can\'t quit it until now.

But now, It\'s a time to quit it.

>> But now, it\'s time to quit it.

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