If you can change something about yourself, what would it be and why?
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If you can change something about yourself, what would it be and why?
I would like to change my my personality.
Because of I have introverted personality, when I was young, i couldn\'t say what I wanted to say.
I envy person who to have outgoing personality.
If I behave like that, I run out of my energy.
I want to be a person who gets along with everyone.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
In order to avoid stagnation, it\'s important for changes to be made almost continuously. No matter whether it\'s changing the way your present yourself, developing your skills, takin a course or changing your routine – you are your own boss in life and a huge amount of change comes from within. But at some point, we should also be contented with what we have in our life. :)
I would like to change my my personality.
>> I would like to change my personality.
Because of I have introverted personality, when I was young, i couldn\'t say what I wanted to say.
>> I am an introverted person. When I was young, I couldn\'t say what I want to say.
I envy person who to have outgoing personality.
>> I envy people who have an outgoing personality.
If I behave like that, I run out of my energy.
>> If I behave like that, I run out of energy.
I want to be a person who gets along with everyone.
>> CORRECT
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