If you can change something in your house, what would it be and why?
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if I can change something in my house, I want to remove a lot of things in the rest of room and make home gym. Actually, there\'s gym in the basement of the apartment but there\'s only one rack which can work out various things. I can\'t work at all if someone is using rack. so I want to make own rack in my house. I think that\'s what people who loves working out want to do.
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if I can change something in my house, I want to remove a lot of things in the rest of room and make home gym.
>> If I can change something in my house, I want to remove a lot of things and make the space into a home gym.
Actually, there\'s gym in the basement of the apartment but there\'s only one rack which can work out various things.
>>Actually, there\'s gym in the basement of the apartment but there\'s only one rack where can work out on various things.
I can\'t work at all if someone is using rack. so I want to make own rack in my house.
>> I can\'t work out is someone is using it so I want to have my own at my house.
I think that\'s what people who loves working out want to do.
>> I think that\'s what people who loves working out wants to do.
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