If you can control the time of your sleep, would you rather sleep more or sleep less? why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was close to a morning person. I used to wake up 6 am and doing excercises or something in the morning.
However, I got married with a night owl, which he go to bed around 3 am and wake up late. Since living with a night owl, my life pattern should be changed. It make me to be very exhausted. Most hard thing is that I couldn\'t start my day in early because I sleep late around 1 am sometimes over the 1 am. When I sleep late, I couldn\'t wake up early even if I wake up early, I can not concentrate with my work well.
Therefore, If I can control the duration of my sleep I would sleep less to get back my morning time. I really enjoy doing something or just thinking alone before someone wakes up in the morning.
강사 첨삭
Hello Young Won!
You and your husband belong in different time frames of sleeping. However, you have to live together and get the hang of sleeping at a time when the two of you both can sleep.
I hope that by now, you are better accustomed to the sleeping pattern of each other.
Thank you for answering my question. This one\'s a very good and well explained composition.
See you in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> I am close to becoming a morning person. I am used to waking up at 6 am and doing exercises or something in the morning.
However, I got married with a night owl, which he go to bed around 3 am and wake up late.
However, I got married with a night owl, which he go to bed around 3 am and wake up late.
>> However, I got married with a night owl who goes to bed around 3 am and wakes up late.
Since living with a night owl, my life pattern should be changed. It make me to be very exhausted.
>> Since I live with a night owl, my life pattern changed. It made me to very exhausted.
Most hard thing is that I couldn\'t start my day in early because I sleep late around 1 am sometimes over the 1 am. When I sleep late, I couldn\'t wake up early even if I wake up early, I can not concentrate with my work well.
>> The hardest thing is that I couldn\'t start my day early because I sleep late around 1 am or sometimes past/ over 1 am. When I sleep late, I couldn\'t wake up early and even if I wake up early, I cannot concentrate with my work well.
Therefore, If I can control the duration of my sleep I would sleep less to get back my morning time. I really enjoy doing something or just thinking alone before someone wakes up in the morning.
>> Correct!
Or: Therefore, if I can control the duration of my sleep I would sleep less to get back to my old morning routine. I really enjoy doing something or just thinking alone before someone wakes up in the morning.
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