If you can eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be and why?

2021-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I can eat one food for the rest of my life, it will be any kinds of salmon cookings. Because I love salmon very much, and salmon cookings are not unhealthy foods like instant foods or junk foods. And there are a lot kinds of salmon cookings, and my best salmon cookings are raw salmon and smoked salmon. Because of those reasons, if I can eat one food for the rest of my life, it will be any kinds of salmon cookings.

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If I can eat one food for the rest of my life, it will be any kinds of salmon cookings.

>> If I can eat a certain food for the rest of my life, it will be all kinds of salmon dishes.

Because I love salmon very much, and salmon cookings are not unhealthy foods like instant foods or junk foods.

>> It\'s because I love salmon so much and it\'s very healthy for us.

And there are a lot kinds of salmon cookings, and my best salmon cookings are raw salmon and smoked salmon.

>> There are many ways to prepare salmon dishes and I think the best is eating it raw or smoking it.

Because of those reasons, if I can eat one food for the rest of my life, it will be any kinds of salmon cookings.

>> This is why I pick salmon dishes.

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