If you can go on a trip with your family, where would it be and why?
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If I can ggo on a trip with my family. I want to travel Europe.
Next year or next next year, me and my family will travel Europe so we planned all of it.
But I want to go there faster because I\'ve never been in Europe and I can see a lot of structures in Europe.
And if I go there with my family, it will be very impressive to me so I want to go to Europe with my family.
And next time, I will go there with my friends.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
That sounds like a wonderful trip :)
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If I can ggo on a trip with my family. I want to travel Europe.
>> If I can go on a trip with my family, I would like to travel to Europe.
>> If I can go on a trip with my family, I would like to travel to Europe.
Next year or next next year, me and my family will travel Europe so we planned all of it.
>> Next year or the following, me and my family will travel to Europe as we planned to.
But I want to go there faster because I\'ve never been in Europe and I can see a lot of structures in Europe.
>> I want to go there as soo as we can because I have never been there. I heard there are a lot of structures there.
And if I go there with my family, it will be very impressive to me so I want to go to Europe with my family.
>> And if I don\'t go there with my family, it will be very impressive so I would like to go with them.
And next time, I will go there with my friends.
>> CORRECT
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