If you can go on a trip with your family, where would it be and why?

2021-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you can go on a trip with your family, where would it be and why? If I can go on a trip with family, I would like to go jeju Island. Jeju is easy to get hotel/pansion and rent car because of the tour city. The price are reasonable too. There are many things to see and food. Also, Jeju is a beautiful in our country. If someone goes there, It was love at first sight.

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That sounds like a wonderful trip!

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If I can go on a trip with family, I would like to go jeju Island.

>> If I can go on a trip with family, I would like to go Jeju Island.

Jeju is easy to get hotel/pansion and rent car because of the tour city.

>> It\'s easy to book a hotel/pension and rent a car in Jeju island.

The price are reasonable too.

>> CORRECT

There are many things to see and food.

>> There are many food and things to see.

Also, Jeju is a beautiful in our country.

>> Also, Jeju Island is a beautiful place in our country.

If someone goes there, It was love at first sight.

>> If someone goes there, they would feel love at first sight.

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