If you can have one thing forever, what would it be and why?
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If you can have one thing forever, what would it be and why?
I have never considered about this issue.
Life dosen\'t everlasting life, I think that it would be impossible for having somthing forever.
I just would like to be fun and happy with a little bit abundant life.
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Hi [이름]! We all have something that we need all the time. Sometimes, it has a sentimental value to us that\'s why it\'s hard to let go. And there are some that are just very useful to us. Either way, we can\'t live without it because of the importance. It teaches us how to value things very much. Thanks for sharing yours :)
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I have never considered about this issue.
Life dosen\'t everlasting life, I think that it would be impossible for having somthing forever.
I just would like to be fun and happy with a little bit abundant life.
>> I have never considered this in my life.
Life dosen\'t everlasting life, I think that it would be impossible for having somthing forever.
>> Life doesn\'t last forever so I think it would be impossible to have something forever as well.
I just would like to be fun and happy with a little bit abundant life.
>> I would just like to be happy with a little abundance in my life.
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