If you can have your own business, what would it be and why?
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If I can have my own business, Korean traditional foods would become my business item. I will sell Korean traditional foods in abroad because I want to tell foreigners their tastes. Also, I want to recommend them to try various kinds of Korean traditional dishes because some Korean traditional foods are good for our health and delicious. I think that if I behave like these, clearly, they will be liked Korean traditional foods.
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Hi Kimberly!
That a very promising business. I would be your number 1 customer since I love Korean traditional food. :)
If I can have my own business, Korean traditional foods would become my business item.
>> If I can have my own business, I want to sell Korean traditional foods.
I will sell Korean traditional foods in abroad because I want to tell foreigners their tastes.
>> I will sell Korean traditional foods abroad because I want to let foreigners taste them.
Also, I want to recommend them to try various kinds of Korean traditional dishes because some Korean traditional foods are good for our health and delicious.
>> Also, I want to recommend them to try various kinds of Korean traditional dishes because most of them are delicious and healthy.
I think that if I behave like these, clearly, they will be liked Korean traditional foods.
>> I think that if I behave like this, they will like Korean traditional foods.
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