If you can have your own business, what would it be and why?

2022-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I can have my own business, I rather to have a software business. Nowadays, I think it is wiser to choose some kinds of businesses those are about programming. And also I am interested in programming too, so I want to have a software business.

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I think that is a great investment. Technology continuously evolves. :)

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If I can have my own business, I rather to have a software business.

>> If I can have my own business, I\'d rather to have a software business.

Nowadays, I think it is wiser to choose some kinds of businesses those are about programming.

>> CORRECT

And also I am interested in programming too, so I want to have a software business.

>> I am also interested in programming so I want to have a software business.

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