If you can have your own restaurant, what food do you want to serve there?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I had a restaurant, I would serve European or American food. Because I liked foreign food more than Korean food since I was young. So I still prefer foods such as hamburgers, pasta, and pizza when I eat. So when I have a meal with my friends, I search for a good restaurant near my house on the Internet. And if I open it in Korea, I want to try fusion food by combining Korean and foreign food.
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Hi Steve! That sounds nice! I love those kinds of food as well. You made me hungry while reading your answer. Hahahaha!
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If I had a restaurant, I would serve European or American food. Because I liked foreign food more than Korean food since I was young.
>> If I can have my own restaurant, I would serve European or American food because I used to like foreign food more than Korean food when I was young.
So I still prefer foods such as hamburgers, pasta, and pizza when I eat.
>> I still prefer food such as hamburgers, pasta, and pizza whenever I eat.
So when I have a meal with my friends, I search for a good restaurant near my house on the Internet.
>> So when I eat out with my friends I search for good restaurants near my house using the internet.
And if I open it in Korea, I want to try fusion food by combining Korean and foreign food.
>> As I look into it, I pick the ones with the fusion of Korean and foreign food.
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