If you can have your own restaurant, what food do you want to serve there?
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I\\\'m not good at cooking. but my sister is good at it. and my favorite food which she made is kimchi stew. I love it. so If I have own restaurant, I employ my sister and let her make kimchi stew and Stir-fried Vienna Sausages and Vegetables. I think most of client will be happy after they eat food she made. I am confident my sister\'s cooking level.
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Hi [이름]! That sounds nice! I love those kinds of food as well. You made me hungry while reading your answer. Hahahaha!
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I\\\'m not good at cooking. but my sister is good at it.
>> I\'m not good in cooking but my sister is.
and my favorite food which she made is kimchi stew.
>>My favorite food that she makes is kimchi stew.
I love it. so If I have own restaurant, I employ my sister and let her make kimchi stew and Stir-fried Vienna Sausages and Vegetables.
>> I love it so if I can have my own restaurant, I will hire my sister and let her make kimchi stew, stir fried Vienna sausages and vegetables.
I think most of client will be happy after they eat food she made.
>> I think most clients would be happy if they try my sister\'s cooking.
I am confident my sister\'s cooking level.
>> I am confident with my sister\'s cooking skills.
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