If you can invent something, what would it be?
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In fact, I\'m not good at inventing something. But nowadays, I have one which I want to invent. (It may already exist in reality.) It is a magic glasses like Ironman\'s glasses. Because through the glasses, I can get many informations without searching on Internet. And I can communicate with an AI. I hope this can be invented in reality. And I want to use it in person.
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Hi Kimberly:)
That\'s actually very cool. I think major electronic companies are already working on that.
In fact, I\'m not good at inventing something.
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But nowadays, I have one which I want to invent.
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(It may already exist in reality.)
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It is a magic glasses like Ironman\'s glasses. Because through the glasses, I can get many informations without searching on Internet.
>> It is magic glasses like the ones that Iron Man has. Through theses glasses, I can get many information without searching on the internet.
And I can communicate with an AI.
>>With this, I can also communicate with an AI.
I hope this can be invented in reality.
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And I want to use it in person.
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