If you can invent something, what would it be?

2022-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I can invent something that I want, I want to invent something that is related with a new technique. I think the best invention is something that is very useful to us, but I can invent it very easily. So I want to invent something that is related with a new technique. A new technique has a high possibility and most people don\'t know about it. So if I can invent anything that I want, I want to invent something that is related with a new technique.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

I\'m actually quite confused about the technique that you\'re saying. What technique do you mean? And what is it\'s function?

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If I can invent something that I want, I want to invent something that is related with a new technique.

>>If I can invent something that I want, I want to be something related to a new technique.

I think the best invention is something that is very useful to us, but I can invent it very easily.

>>I think the best invention is something that is very useful to us, but I can\'t invent it very easily.

So I want to invent something that is related with a new technique.

>> CORRECT

A new technique has a high possibility and most people don\'t know about it.

>>A new technique has a high possibility of doing great things and most people don\'t know about it.

So if I can invent anything that I want, I want to invent something that is related with a new technique.

>>So if I can invent something that I want, I want to be something related to a new technique.

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