If you can invent something, what would it be?

2022-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you can invent something, what would it be? If I can invent something, I would make teleport. If possible, I don\'t need to go to work by subway. Also, I can save time a commuting hour. I can travel abroad in a short time. It is fun to imagine, but it\'s probably impossible.

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Hi [이름]:)

I would be glad to invest to your idea. It looks promising.

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If I can invent something, I would make teleport.

>> If I can invent something, I would make teleportation machine.

If possible, I don\'t need to go to work by subway.

>> CORRECT

Also, I can save time a commuting hour.

>> Also, I can save an hour worth of commuting time.

I can travel abroad in a short time.

>> I can travel abroad in a short period of time.

It is fun to imagine, but it\'s probably impossible.

>> CORRECT

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