If you can learn another language, what would it be and why?

2022-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I can learn another language, I want to learn Spanish language. Nowadays, a lot of countries are using Spanish language. And also it will be very easy to learn other Europe languages if I learn Spanish language. Also I can read a lot of books about history. In the past, in Europe, a lot of countries used Spanish language. Also Rome used Latin language, that are based on Spanish language. So I think it will be very useful to learn Spanish language.

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Hi [이름]!

Spanish is actually a great language to learn. It is being used in many countries. It is also the second language that most Americans study.

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If I can learn another language, I want to learn Spanish language.
>> If I can learn another language, I want to learn Spanish.

Nowadays, a lot of countries are using Spanish language.

>> Nowadays, a lot of countries are using Spanish.

And also it will be very easy to learn other Europe languages if I learn Spanish language.

>> It will also be very easy for me to learn other European languages if I learn how to speak in Spanish first.

Also I can read a lot of books about history.

>> Also, I can read a lot of books about history.

In the past, in Europe, a lot of countries used Spanish language.

>> In the past, in European and other countries used Spanish.

Also Rome used Latin language, that are based on Spanish language.

>> They also used Latin in Rome.

So I think it will be very useful to learn Spanish language.

>> This is why I think it is very useful to learn how to speak in Spanish.

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