If you can listen to one song every day, what would it be and why?

2022-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Definitely, it\'s the \"Not afraid\" of Eminem songs. It makes me strong and can do anything else. Eminem\'s songs are all like that, but I think this is the best, If I can listen to one song every day.

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Hi Elic!

I love that song too. It\'s a classic. :)

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Definitely, it\'s the \"Not afraid\" of Eminem songs.

>> It definitely the song of Eminem, \"I\'m not afraid\".

It makes me strong and can do anything else.

>> It makes me feel that I am very strong and can do anything.

Eminem\'s songs are all like that, but I think this is the best, If I can listen to one song every day.

>> Most of Eminem\'s songs are like that but I think that this one is the best. I can listen to this song everyday.

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