If you can live in another city in South Korea, which one will you pick and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will pick Busan because in Busan, I can see the sea. I\'m living in the small town which be surrounded by the mountains. So, I miss the sea. At the sea, I want to see various kinds of sea creatures like crab. Most of all, I want to see the landscape of peaceful sea. Due to these reasons,  I will pick Busan. / My second pick is Seoul because Seoul is South Korean capital. So, most of huge companies are located in Seoul. This means that I can see many buildings. I like observing many buildings. Due to these reasons, my second pick is Seoul.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly :)
That\'s true! Seoul and Busan are terrific places to live in because they\'re fun and convenient places.
I will pick Busan because in Busan, I can see the sea.
>> I will pick Busan because I can see the sea there.
I\'m living in the small town which be surrounded by the mountains.
>> I\'m living in a small town which is surrounded by mountains.
So, I miss the sea.
>> CORRECT
At the sea, I want to see various kinds of sea creatures like crab.
>> I want to see various kinds of sea creatures like crab by the sea.
Most of all, I want to see the landscape of peaceful sea.
>> Most of all, I want to see the landscapes of the peaceful sea.
Due to these reasons,  I will pick Busan.
>> Due to these reasons, I will pick Busan.
My second pick is Seoul because Seoul is South Korean capital.
>> My second pick is Seoul because it is the capital of South Korea.
So, most of huge companies are located in Seoul.
>> CORRECT
This means that I can see many buildings.
>> CORRECT
I like observing many buildings.
>> CORRECT
Due to these reasons, my second pick is Seoul.
>> CORRECT
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