If you can live in another city in South Korea, which one will you pick and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course I want to live in Seoul.
I am living in the city which is beside on Seoul, so it is comfortable to live but not perfectly.
But I expect that if I go to Seoul, if can be a perfect life for me.
My parents said that a country side is more comfortable than living in city, but I don\'t think like that.
Because I am born in the city and also I am more comfortable at the city.
I can enjoy a lot of entertainments and also there are a lot of new techniques.
So if I can live in another city in South Korea, I want to live in Seoul.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
That\'s true. Seoul is the place to be since it is the capital of South Korea. Everything that you can think of is already there which makes it so convenient. Good choice!
Of course I want to live in Seoul.
>> CORRECT
I am living in the city which is beside on Seoul, so it is comfortable to live but not perfectly.
>> I am living a the city which is beside Seoul, so it is comfortable to live here. Although, it is not perfect.
But I expect that if I go to Seoul, if can be a perfect life for me.
But I expect that if I go to Seoul, it will be a perfect life for me.
My parents said that a country side is more comfortable than living in city, but I don\'t think like that.
>> My parents said that a country side is more comfortable than living in city, but I don\'t think so.
Because I am born in the city and also I am more comfortable at the city.
>> It is because I am born in the city that\'s why I am more comfortable here.
I can enjoy a lot of entertainments and also there are a lot of new techniques.
>>I can enjoy a lot of entertainments and there are a lot of new technologies.
So if I can live in another city in South Korea, I want to live in Seoul.
>> So if I can live in another city in South Korea, it would be in Seoul.
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