If you can live in another city in South Korea, which one will you pick and why?

2022-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I can live in another city, I wish to live in Europe or U.S.A. So I wouldn\'t learn English. Because of one\'s native language.

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If I can live in another city, I wish to live in Europe or U.S.A.

>> If I can live in another city, I wish to live in a city in Europe or U.S.A.

So I wouldn\'t learn English. Because of one\'s native language.

>> This is because I don\'t need to learn how to speak in English more [이름]ce it\'s there native language there.

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