If you can magically do one thing, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go to the past when I was a little kid because I have such a good memories when I was young.
Since age 7 to 11, I was in international school located in Bangkok.
I had a lots of fun traveling Thailand and learning English at the same time.
If I go back, I will keep studying English and I won\'t lose my English skills like now that I regret.
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Since age 7 to 11, I was in international school located in Bangkok.
>> Since the age of 7 to 11, I was in an international school in Bangkok.
I want to go to the past when I was a little kid because I have such a good memories when I was young.
>> If I can magically do one thing, I would want to go to the past when I was a kid because I had such good memories back then.
Since age 7 to 11, I was in international school located in Bangkok.
>> Since the age of 7 to 11, I was in an international school in Bangkok.
I had a lots of fun traveling Thailand and learning English at the same time.
>> I had lots of fun traveling Thailand and I learned English at the same time.
>> I had lots of fun traveling Thailand and I learned English at the same time.
If I go back, I will keep studying English and I won\'t lose my English skills like now that I regret.
>> If I can go back, I will keep studying English so that I won\'t loose my touch to it like today.
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