If you can make a law, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can make a law, I want to get rid of all kinds of taxes on children\'s products.
Many kinds of children\'s products are very expensive and they include the same taxes as adult items.
I think this benefit is essential for children.
If so, parents raising children are also less burdened, and it will help to increase the population.
Because depopulation is now a serious social problem in many courntries.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer! :)
Rules are established to protect the weaker class in the society since they are at a disadvantage if such regulations are broken. When rules are properly set and followed, they provide a stable environment and human co-existence in a community, resulting in peace and order.
I think your suggestion is good. :)
>> CORRECT
Many kinds of children\'s products are very expensive and they include the same taxes as adult items.
>> CORRECT
I think this benefit is essential for children.
>> I think this would benefit parents in terms of essentials for children.
If so, parents raising children are also less burdened, and it will help to increase the population.
>>If so, parents raising children are also less burdened, and it will help increase the population.
Because depopulation is now a serious social problem in many courntries.
>> It is because the population now is decreasing which is a serious social problem in many countries.
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