If you can make a new policy in your school or in a company, what would it be and why?
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If I can make a policy in a company, I will make a policy that is supporting money once a month to buy a book.
Because books make people creative and expand their insight.
It would help mentality as well as work efficiency.
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If I can make a policy in a company, I will make a policy that is supporting money once a month to buy a book.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> If I can make a policy, I will have the employees get additional pay to buy a book once a month.
Because books make people creative and expand their insight.
>>> CORRECT!
It would help mentality as well as work efficiency.
It would help mentality as well as work efficiency.
>>> It would mentally help them leading to work efficiency.
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