If you can make a rule in your school, what would it be and why?

2021-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to make a rule that we can wear clothes except school uniform. Because school uniform is actually discomfortable. And it is not good to do activities.

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Hi [이름]! :)

Rules are established to protect the weaker class in the society since they are at a disadvantage if such regulations are broken. When rules are properly set and followed, they provide a stable environment and human co-existence in a community, resulting in peace and order.

I think your suggestion is good. :)

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I want to make a rule that we can wear clothes except school uniform.

>> I want to make a rule where students can wear civilian clothes for school.

Because school uniform is actually discomfortable.

>> It is because school uniforms are very uncomfortable.

And it is not good to do activities.
>> It\'s doesn\'t feel good when I do activities.

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