If you can make your own holiday, what would it be? When should it be celebrated and why?
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I want to set my birthday as my own holiday. because it’s the day I was norn, I want to spend a day only for myself out of 365days. On my own holiday, I want to spend a day swimming leisurely in a good hotel with a swimming pool whlie reciving service for three meals.
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Wow! That\'s a great choice! I think that would be a great holiday that you will enjoy.
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>> I want to set my birthday as a holiday because it is the day that I was born and I want to spend that day for myself.
On my own holiday, I want to spend a day swimming leisurely in a good hotel with a swimming pool whlie reciving service for three meals.
>> On my own holiday, I want to spend that day by swimming leisurely in a good hotel with a swimming pool while receiving service for three meals.
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