If you can move to another country, which one would you pick and why?

2022-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I can do it, I should choice the France or U.S.A. It\'s because of there are an aircraft manufacturer. Boeing and Airbus. If I have a chance, I want to work there.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic:)

Those are wonderful places on their own. It\'s a bonus already that your dream places are there as well. I hope that you can fulfill your dreams!

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

If I can do it, I should choice the France or U.S.A.

>> If I can do it, I will choose either going to France or U.S.A.

It\'s because of there are an aircraft manufacturer.

>> It\'s because the aircraft manufacturers are there.

Boeing and Airbus.

>> They are the Boeing and Airbus.

If I have a chance, I want to work there.

>> CORRECT

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