If you can move to another country, which one would you pick and why?

2022-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you can move to another country, which one would you pick and why? If I can move to another country, I would like to go to Australia or New Zealand. I don\'t have a special reason to live there, I just think Australia is a natural place. It has good air and beautiful natural scenery. If I live there, my body and mind will be healthy.

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Those are actually good countries. It\'s so peaceful to live there.

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If I can move to another country, I would like to go to Australia or New Zealand.

>>CORRECT

I don\'t have a special reason to live there, I just think Australia is a natural place.

>> I don\'t have a special reason to live there. I just think that Australia is a natural place.

It has good air and beautiful natural scenery.

>> The air there is good and it has beautiful sceneries.

If I live there, my body and mind will be healthy.
>> CORRECT

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