If you can pick a superpower that you can have, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hahaha, I think it\'s an imagination that everyone thought about when they were young. In my case, I will pick a superpower that It\'s a mind reading. It\'s because I want to be close to everyone.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic :)
Imagine the possibilities if you have that superpower. You can do tons of things with it. Like what they say, \"Great power comes with great responsibilities.\"
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Hahaha, I think it\'s an imagination that everyone thought about when they were young.
>> CORRECT
In my case, I will pick a superpower that It\'s a mind reading.
>> In my case, I will pick the superpower where I can read minds.
It\'s because I want to be close to everyone.
>> It\'s because I want to be close with everyone.
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