If you can renovate something in your house, what would it be and why?

2022-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you can renovate something in your house,I want to renovate our rooms of the second floor. When I built my house, Our architect showed the outline and the size of the total house. At that time I couldn\'t understand how large our rooms. If I can change the house, I will get rid of our halls on the second floor. I will make our rooms wider.

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If you can renovate something in your house,I want to renovate our rooms of the second floor.

>> If I can renovate something in our house, I want to renovate our rooms on the second floor.

When I built my house, Our architect showed the outline and the size of the total house.

>> When I built my house, our architect showed the outline and the size of the total house.

At that time I couldn\'t understand how large our rooms.

>> At that time, I couldn\'t understand how large our rooms that time.

If I can change the house, I will get rid of our halls on the second floor. I will make our rooms wider.

>> If I can change our house, I will get rid of our halls on the second floor and I will make our rooms wider.

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