If you can renovate something in your house, what would it be and why?
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If I can do it, I want to make an attic room. Where the attic ceiling is made of glass and I can see the constellations. Plus, I want to make a dog house for DukGu which is our dog name at the yard. Last, I want to make a place where I can repair a car. Even if I\'m a mechanic of airplane, I might repair a car. :)
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Hi Elic!
It sounds like an American home! That\'s good.
If I can do it, I want to make an attic room.
>>If I can do it, I want to make a room in the attic where the ceiling is made of glass and I can see the constell
Where the attic ceiling is made of glass and I can see the constellations.
>> Where the attic ceiling is made of glass and I can see the constellations.
Plus, I want to make a dog house for DukGu which is our dog name at the yard.
>> Plus, I want to make a dog house for DukGu, which is our dog, at the yard.
Last, I want to make a place where I can repair a car.
>> Last, I want to have a place where I can repair a car.
Even if I\'m a mechanic of airplane, I might repair a car. :)
>> Even if I\'m a mechanic of airplanes, I might repair cars as well. :)
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