If you can renovate something in your house, what would it be and why?
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If I can renovate something in my house, then I will make a gym room.
It is still on the pandemic, so it is difficult to go to a gym everyday.
Because of this reason, I want to make a gym room in my house.
So that even tough I\'m not able to go to a gym, I can still exercise in my house.
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Hi [이름]!
If I can renovate something in my house, then I will make a gym room.
>> CORRECT
It is still on the pandemic, so it is difficult to go to a gym everyday.
>> We are still in a pandemic so it is difficult to go to a gym everyday.
Because of this reason, I want to make a gym room in my house.
>> CORRECT
So that even tough I\'m not able to go to a gym, I can still exercise in my house.
>> So that even though I\'m not able to go to a gym, I can still exercise in my house.
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