If you can see somebody else's future by touching them, whose future would you like to see and why d

2018-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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That will be a very interesting ability if I had it. If I got that one, I would like to see my nephew's future because he is seven-year-old and as the kid like the age, he's being acting up. So I'm really curious about how he will grow up well. He is not good at hula hoop at the moment so I would like to see him do it well in the future. Also I would like to see his future now because when he become an adult, I will be older than now. So sad. As we have many memories, I want to have more good memories with him. And I will tell him, he is a happy person who has a lot of get family's love.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mini! Happy Friday! Wow! This is a little emotional. You must really love your nephew. That is good. ^_^
~T. IRENE~
That will be a very interesting ability if I had it.
>>> That will be a very interesting ability if I have it.
If I got that one, I would like to see my nephew\'s future because he is seven-year-old and as the kid like the age, he\'s being acting up.
>>> If I got that one, I would like to see my nephew\'s future because he is seven years old and just like kids at that age, he\'s been acting up.
So I\'m really curious about how he will grow up well.
>>> So I\'m really curious about how he will grow up.
He is not good at hula hoop at the moment so I would like to see him do it well in the future.
>>> Correct.
Also, I would like to see his future now because when he become an adult, I will be older than now.
>>> Also, I would like to see his future now because when he becomes an adult, I will be older than now.
So sad.
>>> That makes me feel sad.
 As we have many memories, I want to have more good memories with him.
>>> I want to have more good memories with him.
And I will tell him, he is a happy person who has a lot of get family\'s love.
>>> I will tell him that in his future, he is a happy person who gets a lot of love from his family.

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