If you can sell anything from your valuable things, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most valuable thing is health. I had a hard time during last week. I was sick and so scared. during sick, I didn\'t do anything. I just wanted to be healed. now I feel better than last week and I appreciate my daily life. I think there\'s nothing important than health.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
Yes, you had a really hard time last week. Good thing you\'re already okay. :)
As well as being useful, our possessions represent our extended selves. They provide a sense of past and tell us “who we are, where we have come from and perhaps where we are going.
PS: Kindly analyze the question more carefully. The question was about \"things\" so it can be anything like a book or clothes etc. that you are willing to give away.
>> CORRECT
I had a hard time during last week.
>> I had a hard time last week.
I was sick and so scared.
>> I was scared and did not feel well.
during sick, I didn\'t do anything.
>> I was not doing anything during that time.
I just wanted to be healed.
>> CORRECT
now I feel better than last week and I appreciate my daily life.
>> Now, I feel better and I appreciated life more.
I think there\'s nothing important than health.
>> I think there\'s nothing more important than health.
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