If you can sell anything from your valuable things, what would it be and why?
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I don\'t think it\'s worth much, but I\'d like to sell my clothes if I can. I am interested in fashion, so I like to look around and buy clothes. Maybe that\'s why I don\'t wear clothes that I bought recently. In the past, I used to gain a lot of weight, so my clothes were very big, but after I became an adult, I took care of myself and exercised, so I couldn\'t wear the clothes I bought before. So I want to sell clothes that I don\'t wear if I can.
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As well as being useful, our possessions represent our extended selves. They provide a sense of past and tell us “who we are, where we have come from and perhaps where we are going.
I don\'t think it\'s worth much, but I\'d like to sell my clothes if I can.
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I am interested in fashion, so I like to look around and buy clothes.
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Maybe that\'s why I don\'t wear clothes that I bought recently.
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In the past, I used to gain a lot of weight, so my clothes were very big, but after I became an adult, I took care of myself and exercised, so I couldn\'t wear the clothes I bought before.
>> In the past, I used to gain a lot of weight, so my clothes were very big. But after I became an adult, I took care of myself and exercised, so I couldn\'t wear the clothes I bought before.
So I want to sell clothes that I don\'t wear if I can.
>> CORRECT
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