If you can spend a day with a famous person, who would you pick and why?
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If I can spend a day with a famous person, I want to spend a day with David Hume.
David Hume is one of very great and well known philosophers at past.
He thought that we can\'t know the truth that we didn\'t experience.
A lot of people experience somethings and they make reasons that the things were happened.
For instance, we saw only black crows in this world, but we can\'t make a conclusion that the white crows are not existing.
I read about him at some book, and it was very impressive to me.
So I want to spend a day with David Hume, the famous philosopher.
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If I can spend a day with a famous person, I want to spend a day with David Hume.
>> If I can spend a day with a famous person, I would pick David Hume.
David Hume is one of very great and well known philosophers at past.
>> David Hume is one of the greatest and well known philosophers in the past.
He thought that we can\'t know the truth that we didn\'t experience.
>> He said that we can\'t know the truth unless we experience it.
A lot of people experience somethings and they make reasons that the things were happened.
>> A lot of people experience different kinds of things and explain what happens.
For instance, we saw only black crows in this world, but we can\'t make a conclusion that the white crows are not existing.
>> For instance, if we only saw black crows in this world, we can\'t make a conclusion that white crows don\'t exist.
I read about him at some book, and it was very impressive to me.
>> I read about his life through a book and I was very impressed.
So I want to spend a day with David Hume, the famous philosopher.
>> CORRECT
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