If you can suggest one celebration in Korea for a first timer in your country, what will it be and w
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I think it would be Sulnal because it\'s only in Korea and it\'s special to us... :-)
We also have delicious food and lots of people giving each other food. That\'s our tradition.
And also if it doesn\'t have to be a traditional celebration, I would like to recommend Halloween in city...
Because they are famous for painting their faces scary...!
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If you can suggest one celebration in Korea for a first timer in your country, what will it be and why?
I think it would be Sulnal because it\'s only in Korea and it\'s special to us... :-)
>>> It would be Soellal or the Lunar New Year because it happens only in Korea and it\'s special to us.
We also have delicious food and lots of people giving each other food. That\'s our tradition.
>>> We celebrate it with a lot of foods and people are giving everyone food,it\'s part of our tradition to share.
And also if it doesn\'t have to be a traditional celebration, I would like to recommend Halloween in city...
Because they are famous for painting their faces scary...!
>>> Moreover, if they don\'t like traditional celebration then I would like to recommend Halloween in the city. This is famous because participants will be painting their faces which makes they scary.
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