If you compare the train, bus and airport systems in your country; which is the cheapest? Which is t
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The cheapest is by bus. Second, train more cheaper than airplane. however, the airlines sometimes implement event of cheap cost. So, there are change cheap cost. it is efficient to go to nearby distance by bus. Taking a train good for efficient when I went to the another area. and the airplane usually go to other countries. Whichever, using the transportation\'s accidents are very dangerous.
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Hey, Clara. Happy Monday!^^ Too bad we do not have class today but I look forward to talking to you again tomorrow. I hope you have finally settled into your apartment in Seoul. Again, thank you for sharing your thoughts on your homework topic. Keep it up! ~ teacher Jane c\",)
The cheapest is by bus.
>>> CORRECT =)
OR>>> The cheapest is the bus.
Second, train more cheaper than airplane.
>>> The second cheapest is the train. The train is cheaper than the airplane.
however, the airlines sometimes implement event of cheap cost.
>>> However, the airlines sometimes offer cheap flight deals.
So, there are change cheap cost.
>>> So you can get tickets at a cheaper price.
it is efficient to go to nearby distance by bus.
>>> It is efficient to travel locally by bus.
Taking a train good for efficient when I went to the another area.
>>> Taking a train is more efficient when I go to farther areas.
and the airplane usually go to other countries.
>>> And it is more efficient to travel to other countries by airplane.
Whichever, using the transportation\'s accidents are very dangerous.
>>> Whichever transportation we choose, we are at risk of being in accidents.
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