If you could ask your favorite Disney princess a question, what would it be?

2022-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Gela

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If I could ask my favorite Disney princess a question, I would ask a question about the reason why they could be confident and brave. So, my question is \"what is your life motto?\" Also, I would ask a way to overcome an adversify. Due to people face the problem and it is tired to endure, I want to know their great way. So, I suppose that I would ask many things. I hope I could meet them in person someday.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Kimberly!

Another great homework submission! I totally agree that you should take advantage of meeting your favorite Disney princess and ask a lot of questions!
I love how you see the positive things of watching Disney movies and learn life lessons.

Thank you, and see you in class!

~ Teacher Gela

If I could ask my favorite Disney princess a question, I would ask a question about the reason why they could be confident and brave. 
>> If I could ask my favorite Disney princess a question, I would ask a question about how could she be confident and brave.
So, my question is \"what is your life motto?\" 
>> So my question would be \"What is your life motto?\" 
Also, I would ask a way to overcome an adversify. 
>> Also, I would ask a way to overcome adversity. 
Due to people face the problem and it is tired to endure, I want to know their great way. 
>> Due to people facing problems, and it is tiring to endure, I want to know her great way. 
So, I suppose that I would ask many things. 
>> So, I suppose, that I would ask many things. 
I hope I could meet them in person someday.
>> I hope I can meet her in person someday.

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