If you could be a celebrity for a day, which celebrity would you be?
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I want to be heungmin Son,soccer player. I think he is the best soccer player in my country. He is very passionate and genius. also He can speak various language. that\'s really what I want to be him.
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I want to be heungmin Son,soccer player.
>> I want to be Heungmin Son, the soccer player.
I think he is the best soccer player in my country.
>>CORRECT
He is very passionate and genius.
>>He is a genius and very passionate.
also He can speak various language.
>> He can also speak various languages.
that\'s really what I want to be him.
>> That is why I want to be him for a day.
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